I picked this because I like staying up all night and watching lights light up. When we watch the lights light up we eat popcorn and sometimes watch movies up and it is so fun. Even when we stay up until 10.00 sometimes.
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Hello Ariana, I am Vitaraag. You have put so much effort into this acrostic poem. I really like the sentence gleaming and glowing. Do you want to see the southern lights? I want to but we can't. Maybe next time you can say what you are talking about because some people don't know about it. Keep up the phenomenal work!
Hello Ariana, WOW, I am surprised by your phenomenal acrostic poem! It is so perfect in it's own way and described everything beautifully.
My favourite line is 'highlights in the sky' because after seeing the picture, it really is a beautiful art of highlights in the sky, don't you think? I also like how you used some amazing words like gleaming and sparkling because that really enhances your work.
Maybe next time you put a photo of the southern lights to let people understand what you're writing.
Hi Ariana, Well done on finishing this activity. Your poem about lights is great. I like how you used alliteration in your poem (Gleaming and glowing). It made your poem even better! I find making poems pretty hard, what did you find hard? Keep up the good work.
Hello Ariana,
ReplyDeleteI am Vitaraag. You have put so much effort into this acrostic poem. I really like the sentence gleaming and glowing. Do you want to see the southern lights? I want to but we can't. Maybe next time you can say what you are talking about because some people don't know about it. Keep up the phenomenal work!
Vitaraag
Hello Ariana,
ReplyDeleteWOW, I am surprised by your phenomenal acrostic poem! It is so perfect in it's own way and described everything beautifully.
My favourite line is 'highlights in the sky' because after seeing the picture, it really is a beautiful art of highlights in the sky, don't you think? I also like how you used some amazing words like gleaming and sparkling because that really enhances your work.
Maybe next time you put a photo of the southern lights to let people understand what you're writing.
Happy Blogging
Gargee HPS
hpsgargeej.blogspot.co.nz
Hi Ariana,
ReplyDeleteWell done on finishing this activity. Your poem about lights is great. I like how you used alliteration in your poem (Gleaming and glowing). It made your poem even better! I find making poems pretty hard, what did you find hard? Keep up the good work.